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You were my real first kiss
My real first hug
You were the first
The first one I loved

You were the first
to kiss me french
you were the first
to make me so tense

You were the first
to go to first base
to second and third
and back to home plate

You were the first
to tell a secret one day
You were the first
to turn and betray

You were the first
to hold me so tight
to make me feel loved
to make me feel right

You were the first
to give me gifts
give me things shiny
make my spirit lift

You were the first
to beat me at hot-hands
to warm me when I was cold
to be there,to trust in

You were the first
to take me on a date
You were the first
my soul mate

You were the first
to get me confused
make me feel special
then make me feel used

You were the first
to not call on the phone
to not listen to me
and to leave me alone

You were the first
who broke my heart
now that it's shattered
we must part

You were the first, my love
in every way
You were the first , my love
day after day

My first to question
your answers you dont know
So now you must be
the first to go

Feelings still beat
deep with inside
but those are feeling
that will alwayz hide

Until they are nothing
The feelings are gone
Then my first lust and lose
Will finally leave me alone
©2004-2009 ~Kinala--Shaggy
:iconkinala--shaggy:

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just a random poem out the top of my head..enjoy

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:iconnitemare88:
this is awsome, it really hits home
:+fav:
nitemare~

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"Her fingers started to bleed, and as she bit bac salty tears, the conductor called out, lets run it again"
:iconkinala--shaggy:
Thank you so much....thanx for the fav. ^_^

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~ Every Heart ~

* Cause somethings gotta go wrong cause i'm feelin way to damn good...and....Its like everytime I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down* ~Nickelback~

--I love inuyasha -- "SIT BOY!" :D
*Glomps Inuyasha*
:iconallaroundblueartist:
awww. but remember... no one really forgets their very first love.... lol... mine was in kinder, and then true love lasted for 7 yrs.

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~Isn't it strange how everyone wants a place in heaven, but they don't want to believe, do, or say anything to get there?

~nothing spoils the taste of peanut butter better than unrequited love. -charlie brown.
:iconkinala--shaggy:
yeah yeah..sadly---(well i dont know why--but like my love is in sets of 4's...Kinder-4th grade I liked a kid names cody, 4th - 8th I liked a kid named josh (went out on and off==the longest 4yrs of my life) and then 8th - now has been louis---(and it stoped today) *sigh* maybe if I could find someone to like for more than "4YRS!" yeesh.

--
~ Every Heart ~

* Cause somethings gotta go wrong cause i'm feelin way to damn good...and....Its like everytime I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down* ~Nickelback~

--I love inuyasha -- "SIT BOY!" :D
*Glomps Inuyasha*
:iconstar-be-born:
Oh god. This is one of the best peices of poetry I have ever read in my intire life.

fav it.
:iconshuurajou:
Very beautiful, true & touchign piece. That first 'true' love, you'll know when you have it, and you'll hold onto and cherish it forever.
:iconkinala--shaggy:
yeah ^_^

--
~ Every Heart ~

* Cause somethings gotta go wrong cause i'm feelin way to damn good...and....Its like everytime I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down* ~Nickelback~

--I love inuyasha -- "SIT BOY!" :D
*Glomps Inuyasha*
:iconkinala--shaggy:
*gasp* Thank you soo much ^_^ :hug:

--
~ Every Heart ~

* Cause somethings gotta go wrong cause i'm feelin way to damn good...and....Its like everytime I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down* ~Nickelback~

--I love inuyasha -- "SIT BOY!" :D
*Glomps Inuyasha*
:icondracoprncs1310:
*hug* u.u; Well at least you know what it's like.... *has never had a real bf in her life* I try and try and it just goes nowhere... -_-; Most if not all boys are idiots...

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